{"content":{"sharePage":{"page":0,"digests":[{"id":"44816664","dateCreated":"1319405103","smartDate":"Oct 23, 2011","userCreated":{"username":"mschroej","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/mschroej","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/meadowhill7-8esl.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/44816664"},"dateDigested":1531982765,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Spelling and proof reading ","description":"Spelling:<br \/>\nGrabbed<br \/>\nChancellor <br \/>\n<br \/>\nRead your story again and look for other misspelled words. I think you may have just typed them wrong. <br \/>\n<br \/>\nProofreading:<br \/>\n<br \/>\nCapitalize the first word in a quotation. Ex: She said,&quot; Who are you?&quot;<br \/>\n<br \/>\nCapitalize the word I <br \/>\n<br \/>\nPut an apostrophe when making a contraction. Ex: I'm","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"44816032","dateCreated":"1319404403","smartDate":"Oct 23, 2011","userCreated":{"username":"mschroej","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/mschroej","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/meadowhill7-8esl.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/44816032"},"dateDigested":1531982765,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Writing suggestion ","description":"Something that a lot of writers have trouble with is repeating themselves too much. I'm always struggling when I write to come up with different ways of saying things.  When you read your story, do you see places when you are saying the same thing or saying something the same way over and over. See if you can find new ways of saying these things. <br \/>\n<br \/>\nI think it is great that you have so much dialog between the characters. I would look at the book that you are reading or any other story with dialog to see how that author wrote conversations between characters. <br \/>\n<br \/>\nThis is a very interesting story. Why does Damen like her enough to give up his life for her? I'm also wondering what happened when she went to vist the chancellor? Who is this girl? What happened to her?","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]}],"more":false},"comments":[]},"http":{"code":200,"status":"OK"},"redirectUrl":null,"javascript":null,"notices":{"warning":[],"error":[],"info":[],"success":[]}}