{"content":{"sharePage":{"page":0,"digests":[{"id":"45921532","dateCreated":"1320845869","smartDate":"Nov 9, 2011","userCreated":{"username":"mschroej","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/mschroej","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/meadowhill7-8esl.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/45921532"},"dateDigested":1531982724,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Writing suggestions","description":"I think you did an okay job with this writing.  It's pretty much organized and there aren't a lot of mistakes.  <br \/>\nMy question though is why should I read it?  Why is this going to be interesting to an audience? <br \/>\n<br \/>\nSometimes, it is good to write things like this just to try and come up with ideas for other, better writing.  <br \/>\n<br \/>\nLook at this piece, and tell me what you think would make a more interesting writing piece. What do you think is here that would be really interesting for someone to read about?","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"45920952","dateCreated":"1320845417","smartDate":"Nov 9, 2011","userCreated":{"username":"mschroej","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/mschroej","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/meadowhill7-8esl.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/45920952"},"dateDigested":1531982724,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Spelling and Proofreading","description":"Spelling: <br \/>\nonce <br \/>\nfridge<br \/>\n<br \/>\nRead this again and look for other typos.  I think you know how to spell the words, but just typed them wrong. <br \/>\n<br \/>\nProofreading: <br \/>\nCapitalize proper nouns. Including the names of holidays.  <br \/>\n<br \/>\nvocabulary: <br \/>\nTradition - a tradition is something that your family or culture does over and over again on special days or at special times.  For example, it is a tradition to shoot off fireworks on the 4th of July in the United States. <br \/>\n<br \/>\nLook at your writing and see where you can substitute the word tradition for another word that you used.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]}],"more":false},"comments":[]},"http":{"code":200,"status":"OK"},"redirectUrl":null,"javascript":null,"notices":{"warning":[],"error":[],"info":[],"success":[]}}