the camp
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Alexander Leal ESL
3/30/12
What the living conditions like at camp? The living conditions at th…
Alexander Leal ESL
3/30/12
What the living conditions like at camp? The living conditions at the camp were very hard for the family. The family will wake up all cover with dust that came through the knotholes. It was hard for other people also in the camp it affect young that where just going to begin their life. This living conditions where affecting everyone in the camp because they didn’t fetal at home they fetal like their were in a prison.
The food wasn’t served like they used top and they found it disgusting. They served rice with sweet things on it they couldn’t eat such a mixture. The food wasn’t the same that they ate at home. This people in the camp didn’t like the food that they gave in the camp.
They live in a small room. Our room was crowed. The family needs to share two rooms. The room was sixteen by twenty foot. It size is like a living room. They family got two for twelve. The family was crowed they didn’t have that much space to move.
The cabin was dusty because their was a lot of holes in the walls. They wake up coated with dust that had bowled through the knotholes and in through the slits around the door way. It looked liked cubicle had been spray with fine dust.
These entire made life hard thing made life hard for the family in the camp. This family need to life like this food that was disgusting and little room for the family to move around.
Farewall of Manzanar
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Brenda Silva Mr.Schoreder
March 28, 2012 ESL/Writing Farewell of Manzanar The living conditions …
Brenda Silva Mr.Schoreder
March 28, 2012 ESL/Writing Farewell of Manzanar The living conditions in the camp was hard for the family. One living condition that was difficult in the camp was the food. The food was not served like they were used to and they found it disgusting. They served the rice with sweet things and Japanese don’t like to eat rice with sweet thing. When they eat the food in the camp they don’t feel happy eating that food. When they eat the food in the camp they don’t feel like they are at home. Another living condition that was difficult in the camp is living in a small room. The room was very crowded. The room was sixteen by twenty feet, the size of a living room. The family got two for twelve people. Almost twelve people had to live in that small room people. They had to share with twelve people in that small room. Another way of a living condition in t he camp was the cabin was duty because had a lot of hole in the wall. In the night the wind blows air through the holes and dust comes out. When they woke up coated with dust that had blown up through the knotholes. Also thought the slits around the door way. It looked like the cubicle had been sprayed with fine dust.
All of these made the family live difficult at the camp.
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The cabins were dusty because it had a lot of holes in the walls. They woke up in the mornings and they were coated with dust that had been blown through the knotholes and through the slits around the doorway. The cubicles look they were sprayed with fine dust
All of these things made their life hard for the family’s in the camp.